When I first started to think about practically animating the story of Claire House Children's Hospice I went off on a little tangent and tried to create a metaphor for the whole concept of the charity. I came up with a nautical one after I interviewed a family who uses the services and they had called it a 'lifeline'.
I think at this point I was looking back at 'Sarah's Story' for the NSPCC and how they had used a simple metaphor of the train journey to accompany the narrative. Herein lies the difference, Moth (the animators) were still using the original voiceover from Sarah and created a visual metaphor because the distressing subject matter could not be displayed literally. I got a bit lost and carried away with the idea of metaphor and created a whole script around the idea of Claire House as a nautical lifeline, but really it didn't need tweaking that much, which is why I eventually went back to the original voices and trimmed 45 minutes of dialogue into a 2 minute 30 second soundbite capturing the essence of the conversation instead. A much more authentic and direct way of telling the CH story.
Before I went back to original idea of using the family's voices though, I managed to get pretty far along with a script, a storyboard and a partly-completed basic animatic (below). Sometimes you need to abandon an idea to make room for the better one though, not matter how invested you might have been. I think part of me was just scared of getting into the real audio without a 'theme' to fall back on.
Brine-soaked
cheeks belong at sea,
Not at The House
That Claire built
The House that Claire
Built is not like other houses…
It is a special
house.
A house set away from
everyday life,
Full of
extraordinary, wonderful people.
It was made out of hope,
And painted with joy,
The Claire House
compass always helps us to find fun.
Here we learn
together how to navigate rough waters and high winds,
For we know well,
that calm seas never made a strong sailor;
Claire House is our
lifeline,
Our steady anchor when
The Great Storm Cat comes prowling
And tries to cast us
adrift.
When our tiny vessels
struggle in the waves,
And it feels like we
are all but lost,
It is The House that
Claire built
Which lights our way.
We cast our nets,
We take in the view,
And we treasure every
joy-soaked moment
The Claire House Crew provides.
Together we sing.
and sound,
For we know the
importance of play,
And the joy that such
things can bring.
But most importantly,
Because our harbour
is full of friendships.
a family.
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Ships can have the Claire house logo as their
colours/flags.
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Possibly an actual Claire House ship? Like a
floating house in the colours?
·
Claire house crew and lighthouse in
candy-striped patterns.
·
Everything in tones of pink and blue, crayon,
watercolour/gouache and coloured pencil. Delicate black line work.
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Moment relating to sensory stimuli, underwater
patterns of light through waves, passing fish, sensory movement of seaweed…
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Moment relating to singing, scene change from
crew singing camera sinks down to see family of whales singing to each other.
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Cast our nets, collect fish with words about
Claire house on them.
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‘Tiny vessels’ metaphor for children, but have an
exaggerated long-shot of a tiny fleet of sailing boats as seen from above.
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